A Visit from the Goon Squad.

Jennifer Egan’s A Visit from the Goon Squad, winner of the 2011 Pulitzer Prize for Fiction (and the incumbent title-holder, since the Board decided that every book published in 2012 sucked and declined to give the award to anyone), is a hybrid novel/short story collection, weaving long vignettes involving a small group of interconnected characters together across time to track, backwards and forwards, their rises, falls, and sometimes rises again. The results are often funny and occasionally tragic, but the writing and characterization are so compelling that when Egan punts the entire thing in the final two sections it is an enormous disappointment.

The book doesn’t have a single protagonist, but we do see several of the core characters in multiple stories, including Sasha, the charismatic, troubled young woman with an unexplained penchant for stealing, one that doesn’t even fully abate when she’s confronted with the consequences of one of her thefts. She works for the unctuous Benny Salazar, a record executive whose fortunes ebb and flow with popular tastes, and whose own history includes a stint in a punk band where many of the novel’s central relationships began. He’s a bit of a wacko magnet, like the former bandmate of his who shows up at Benny’s office one day bearing a freshly-caught fish, or the snobby neighbors in the suburb where he moves with his young, self-conscious wife, looking down on the nouveau-riche Hispanic guy in the neighborhood – who might be a terrorist, because, well, you know. The spectre of 9/11 hangs over many of the stories set in the few years after its aftermath, with the majority of the novel happening in spitting distance of New York City.

The novel’s unconventional structure, with a nonlinear narrative and changing perspectives, gives Egan some room to stretch out and show off her writing skills, which she does well for most of the book. One section comprises a magazine feature, presumably unpublished, written by the brother of one of the major characters, an account of a celebrity puff piece gone so wrong that he ends up in jail (with cause) and the celebrity’s career ends up so derailed that she eventually finds herself paid to be the consort of a murderous third-world dictator, one of the funniest sections of the book, even more timely with the Arab Spring occurring after the novel’s publciation. Sasha runs away from home as a teenager, and one section has her feckless uncle trying to find her in Naples to coax her to come home. The changing styles shift our views of characters, peeling back layers while also turning the onion to show us as much as possible in such a short space.

The last two sections destroyed the book for me, unfortunately. The first of the two is a ninety-page slideshow – excuse me, slidshow – written the daughter of one of those recurring characters, describing their family dynamic and the slightly depressing future in which they live. It’s gimmicky and superficial, losing the depth and most of the wit of the previous sections. The final story is set in a dystopian future a few decades from now, with Egan embarrassing herself trying to craft her own texting vernacular, and where interpersonal skills have broken down the point that people standing next to each other communicate via their devices. It wasn’t funny enough to be a parody and it was a lousy way to send off some great characters.

Next up: I’m past the one-quarter mark in William Gaddis’ mammoth novel The Recognitions. I’m hoping to finish before Thanksgiving week.

Comments

  1. Hard for me to read about a weaving, non-linear, time-traveling novel and not think of Cloud Atlas, particularly with its film adaptation hitting theaters last week. I haven’t seen the film yet, but loved the novel. I highly recommend it and would love to hear your thoughts.

  2. I quite enjoyed the powerpoint chapter. I found it displayed emotion with very little text. The last chapter I don’t even remember however, so it must have been bad! It’s been a while since I read it, but I think the part I enjoyed the most was the story on the African safari.

    Someone made a character map: http://www.filosophy.org/projects/goonsquad/

  3. Brian in San Francisco

    Also liked the PowerPoint chapter a lot but was turned off by the annoying texting bit in the last chapter. I think this and “The Highest Tide” (which talks about the Mariners a fair bit) are the two best books I’ve read in the last year.

  4. I for one find this review spot-on. The PPT chapter seemed like a cop-out to me and while I didn’t hate the last chapter as much a KLAW, it didn’t cash in on the promise of the first parts of the book. I was actually pretty surprised when it won the Pulitzer.

  5. Good luck on The Recognitions. Will Infinite Jest be the last novel you read to complete the TIME 100 list? It was for me…

  6. Infinite Jest is sprawling, indulgent, incomplete, and a bit tedious among many, many other things.

    I think it’s fantastic and I believe that if you like the story and style of something like The Wind-Up Bird Chronicle you’d be able to get into Infinite Jest. Still absolutely not for everybody, though.

    The committee declining to award the Pulitzer Prize this year was an obnoxious bit of haughty posturing. Oh, so book reading and publishing is quickly declining? Let’s not do one of the few things that can boost the industry so that we can appear overly intellectual and sophisticated.

  7. Agree in full — didn’t much care for it. That said, that last chapter (which I also thought was gimmicky, obvious, and too impressed with its own prophetic power) has been growing on me in the year or two since I read it, for reasons I can’t quite place. If you’re in the mood for another short story/novel hybrid from 2011 (and who isn’t?), I’d recommend The Imperfectionsts — pulled it off the genre than Goon Squad, I thought, in part because it wasn’t trying to do anything so Important.

  8. Oh, and while we’re on the subject of self-important short story/novel hybrids, have you read As the Great World Spins? Loved the first 100 pages or so, hated the last 300 pages or so, but I’d be curious to hear your take on it.

  9. … That said, I’m generally critical of gimmicky tactics in books. Johnathan Safran Foer comes to mind as a particularly grating (and gimmicky) author. The trick he turns in Extremely and Incredibly involving a flip-book serves as a good example of this.

    I did, perhaps oddly, enjoy certain other books that fall under this “hysterical realism”, like White Teeth and Calamity Phisics.

  10. LIke others, I enjoyed the PowerPoint chapter and don’t have a strong enough recollection of the last chapter, apart from the stupid texting language to have much of a view. The last chapter reminded me a little of a poor-man’s Super Sad True Love Story – at least the setting and vernacular.